The Story was good and I enjoyed reading it. The problem I had with the book is that there were just way too many roller coasters in Matthew and Shane’s lives. It got to be too much at the end, it would have been a much cleaner read if it had been edited a little better. She writes a really good character and I really enjoyed how the main characters developed, it was fun. She also needs to stay focused on the details, for instance she gives a description of Shane as having a hairy chest and then halfway through the book he is all of a sudden smooth. ( I like a hairy chest, so of course that stood right out for me) I understand that this is her first foray into the M/M Genre. If that is the case I have to give her a 4 star rating on it. She does write a good sex scene. Some were a little long, so once they reach 5-6 pages it is a bit much.